report revision and conclusion

i need a revision for my report and half page conclusion

checking grammer mistakes, citaions (MLA)……… etc

 i made some notes in the word file like on the first highlighted paragragh its little vague, and the second highlighted paragraph ,wording is a bit strange and hard to follow




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